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Procedure Writing

Procedure Writing!!  

Martin the Alien has arrived on Earth and he wants to know how to make a Healthy Hamburger. Here is a procedure, using the correct structure and language, to instruct Martin on how to make my favourite healthy hamburger.

Title: cheese bungle

Ingredients/Materials:

bun

cheese

lettuce

cucumber

tomato sauce

meat patty

Method:

1. Cook the patty.

2. Cut the buns.

3. Get the tomato sauce and squeeze it on the buns.

4.Get the patty and put it on the bun.

5. Cut the cheese and cucumber.

6. Put the cheese and the cucumbers onto the patty.

6.Put the lettuce and the top bun on top.

Animal Reports

I have been learning how to write an animal report using the correct language and structure.

Here is my animal report about Penguins.

PENGUINS

Penguins are birds which can’t fly.

Appearance

Penguins have black and white feathers. They have short legs and webbed feet. Their body is covered in feathers.

Reproduction:

Penguins lay 1 or 2 eggs. They lay their eggs in burrows or nests. The parents take turns keeping the egg warm.

Diet

Penguins eat fish, krill and squid. they eat during the day.

Habitat

Penguins live in Antarctica and the Southern Ocean.

Penguins are under threat because of global warming.

Science Experiment

My group did the hovercraft for the Science Fair. We found out that shape of the balloon and the size of the balloon affects how long it hovers for.

Adverbs

I have been learning how to use adverbs as sentence starters to make my writing more interesting.

Quickly he crept towards the dark cave.

Happily she unwrapped her birthday present.

Loudly the dog barked at the cat up the tree.

Quickly the boy ran in circles for days and days.

My Holiday

I jumped out of bed like a kangaroo and I shouted, “yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yaaaaaaaaaaay.” I raced down the stairs. I got ready, had breakfast and we raced into the car.  We raced

to Auckland. When we were there I met Cery, a girl could Takutai, Jena, Aimee’s little sister and her little brother. Then we went on the bus to the shops to buy some lollies and some donuts.

The next day we went on the train all the way to a hospital to see another baby. We stayed at the hospital for 5 hours. Then we went to Takutai’s dads home. Then we went back home and we had a sleep. After that we did some work and then we went to the wave pools. They had a slide and big waves. We jumped into the pools and we went on the slide. I slid down the slide. I had fun. I love Auckland.  I hope I can go back in the next holidays.