Here is my unassisted recount that I did this week. We didn’t get any help from the teacher. We have made copies so that our friends can help us improve them.
Hi Tae Your recount is not here. I have been looking for it in your Google drive and it seems you have moved it somewhere else.You and I will have to be like detectives at school tomorrow to see if we can track it down. All I can see in your drive is the empty document that I first shared with you which you had to write your story on. I can see you have made some changes and re-named it. MMmmmm! Hope we can solve the mystery together!
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Hi Tae
ReplyDeleteYour recount is not here. I have been looking for it in your Google drive and it seems you have moved it somewhere else.You and I will have to be like detectives at school tomorrow to see if we can track it down. All I can see in your drive is the empty document that I first shared with you which you had to write your story on. I can see you have made some changes and re-named it. MMmmmm! Hope we can solve the mystery together!
Hi Tae
ReplyDeleteI do hope you find your recount, I would love to read and I am sure nanna would too