Learning Journey

Thursday, 7 April 2016

My Recount Plan

Kia ora This week we have been learning how to make plans for a recount so that it has an organised structure.We had to fill in notes in the right places on this form. We didn't have to use whole sentences, just the important ideas. Then we had to read the notes back to each other and they sounded almost like a whole story.Our teacher said it was like we had made a skeleton for our story.Later we get to add the muscles,guts and skin and then we will be finished!


Friday, 1 April 2016

Eating chocolate

   Eating Chocolate
    
Chocolate is delicious.

How yum is chocolate.

Ohhh‘I love chocolate yaaaaaay.

Chocolate chocolate yum chocolate.

Ohhh chocolate is the best food in the world.

Lying in my mouth like a delicious chocolate pizza

At last i swallow

The taste food that hit my heart