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Friday, 1 April 2016

Eating chocolate

   Eating Chocolate
    
Chocolate is delicious.
How yum is chocolate.
Ohhh‘I love chocolate yaaaaaay.
Chocolate chocolate yum chocolate.

Ohhh chocolate is the best food in the world.
Lying in my mouth like a delicious chocolate pizza
At last i swallow

The taste food that hit my heart



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  1. Anonymous26 July 2016 at 10:17

    Hi Tae my name is Te Aroha from Kawakawa primary school. I love chocolate too! Its one of my favourite treats to eat :) I also like how you described how delicious it is. I want chocolate now =D Good job on the post! Keep up the great work

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