Hello Tae. What a great myth you have created. I read this out to my class and they really liked your structure in your story. It helped them to plan out their own story. Keep working hard on your writing. I can't wait to see your next post. Mum
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Hello Tae.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great myth you have created. I read this out to my class and they really liked your structure in your story. It helped them to plan out their own story.
Keep working hard on your writing. I can't wait to see your next post.
Mum
Hi Tae
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing. I found it really interesting and can't wait to read the next one.