Marshmallows
Once upon a time in the woods there was a boy camping Close by, in the small lake, lived a horrible green monster.
One night the boy was roasting marshmallows on the fire. Suddenly he heard a noise. There behind him was the green monster. The monster stared at the marshmallow with his big yellow eyes and licked his lips. The boy took the marshmallow of the stick and then a big tongue slurped the marshmallow up. The monster jumped and danced around happily. he grabbed another shallow but their was no more the monster got mad
The boy ran to the tent. H saw his pillow sitting there looking like a giant marshmallow. He snatched the pillow up off the ground. The monster's eyes went big because he thought it was a marshmallow. The boy threw it and the monster ran after it!!!! The boy took off screaming through the forest. The monster put the pillow onto the stick and put it over the fire. The pillow turned to dust. He was really sad. He sat and stared at the moon.
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