Once my crew and I were living on a grassy
island with a lot of trees and apples. We had swords and a ship. Some days we went out on the ship to go fishing. We were rich and happy. But one day pirates come to our island. The captain shouted “we are taking all your gold.” We said “no, we will fight for the gold.” The pirates said, “ok.”
My crew kicked and punch their heads and
won the fight. The pirates left and our gold was safe. Lukas, Ryan, Michael and I danced and danced until it was time to go to bed.
In the morning I made breakfast for the crew. It was a cold morning so it was apples around the campfire. After that we went and chopped down some trees to make a home. It took all day. Our home was cool and there we stayed.
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