Learning Journey

Tuesday, 2 August 2016

The best holiday

In the holidays, I went to Auckland with my mum and my little brother, Max and we drove to Rainbow's Ends.It was so cool. I got to go on the Forfeit and it was like I was flying into the sky like a plane.

After that,  we went to go pick up my cousins and we drove to the Warehouse. I got a Lego set. It was was Lego Star Wars.

Next, we ran to the arcade and I played a war game full of planes and bombs. I came 1st.

We bought Burger King on the way home and after we had eaten I  played Bloom"s Tower Defence on my tablet then Max and I went and played outside.

1 comment:

  1. Great update, Tae. Sounds like a busy holiday. Building lego is a great way to learn how to follow instructions. Make sure you check your writing for capital letters and full stops, particularly 'i'.

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