This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a thank you letter.
Something I think I have done well is thinking up good things to say but
next time I think I could improve my punctuation because my teacher had to help me find two missing fullstops.
Ka kite ano
6 September 2016
Room 9
Ohaeawai Primary
Tennyson Street
Ohaeawai 0472
Dear Mum and Dad
I am writing to thank you very much for letting me last go on the ski trip last week.
I really enjoyed the whole week and skiing was amazing. My favourite part was the rock climbing.
I would really love go to the rock climbing again, one day.
Love from 6 September 2016
Room 9
Ohaeawai Primary
Tennyson Street
Ohaeawai 0472
Dear Mum and Dad
I am writing to thank you very much for letting me last go on the ski trip last week.
I really enjoyed the whole week and skiing was amazing. My favourite part was rock climbing.
I would really love go to the rock climbing again, one day.
Love from
Tae
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Suggestions for commenting on student work:
1. Positive; say what you liked about the post
2. Thoughtful; a sentence of feedback on what you read, watched or listened to, and
3. Where to next?; A question about something you would like to know more about