Hello Tae I laughed when I saw that you had added two buses to your picture because they look just like the buses we travelled on.Remember that when you write the name of a mountain, you have to use capital letters.You were a great skier.
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Hello Tae
ReplyDeleteI laughed when I saw that you had added two buses to your picture because they look just like the buses we travelled on.Remember that when you write the name of a mountain, you have to use capital letters.You were a great skier.