Making a recount skeleton.

KIa ora After we made our writing skeleton on the planning sheet, we had to highlight all the notes and then copy and paste them below in a list one after the other. So, our story skeleton looks like it can stand up now but it is still just bones. Our teacher says writers call this an outline. We read our outlines out loud to each other and they sound good.Here is mine below.

Tae campbell                 30 March 2016

         

Easter

Yipee it’s chocolate eggs time

At Easter weekend

My family and i

At home

We watch a movie

In the morning i had breakfast pancake

They were soft and tasty

Next we unwrapped some easter eggs

They were as brown as dirt

At the end of the day-go to bed

I felt  happy