This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a thank you letter
Something I think I have done well is thinking of good things to say but
next time I think I could improve my punctuation.
Ka kite ano
8 September 2016
Room 9
Ohaeawai Primary
Tennyson Street
Ohaeawai 0472
Dear Piper’s Lodge
I am writing to thank you very much for looking after us so well during our stay last week.
At your lodge really enjoyed the whole week because your beds were comfy, your bathrooms were clean and fresh and your meals were delicious. My favourite meal was the cream donut.
I hope I can come and stay at Piper’s Lodge again, one day.
Yours sincerely
Tae campbell
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1. Positive; say what you liked about the post
2. Thoughtful; a sentence of feedback on what you read, watched or listened to, and
3. Where to next?; A question about something you would like to know more about