Learning Journey

Thursday, 22 September 2016

fish bone writing

Kia ora
This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese. I decided to put a photo of my animal on the background of my fishbone diagram and publish it just like that.
Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.
Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.
Ka kite ano.
                                 





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  1. Anonymous15 November 2016 at 13:49

    Hi Tae
    I love this post.It reminds me of when I was back in room 3 when Cory came with his little chick.you have great information about the animal.

    Hope to see more
    Amethyst

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